“Jerry” by Anna, grade 5

There was a rat named Jerry who made a hole. The hole was big. A human kicked the hole, then it got blocked. Jerry cried. So he made a private hole. All the rats helped.

Jerry lived in the hole for 18 years. The mouse ate dirt. Jerry ate dirt. And the rats ate dirt. The dirt was big. Jerry was old, and he loved the hole.

The mouse was 32 years old. The mouse was big. Jerry was big. A human came and kicked the hole, but he couldn’t kick it because the hole was too strong. Jerry bit the human. The human ran away. The human cried. Jerry was happy because the human wasn’t going to kick the hole. The mouse was happy too!

The mouse was 77 years old and Jerry was 81 years old. Jerry and the mouse couldn’t die. 1785 years later, he was 1748 years old.

The mouse was 1754 years old. They were very old. The hole was still there. Jerry ate ants.

Jerry’s mom and dad could not die. The mom was 6673 years old and the dad was 8435 years old. They were very old. The hole was still there, and Jerry and mouse were happy. The human who tried to kick the hole passed away. Now Jerry did not know but he was happy that no one could kick the hole anymore.